Starter: Complete the spag.com test.
Today, you are going to write a description using yesterday's brainstorm. At the bottom are some of your brainstorms from yesterday. Have a look at the work and magpie the phrases you like. I have underlined my favourite ones.
Learning Objective : To be able to write a Scene Description
Things we are looking for:
Success Criteria: Use powerful adjectives to describe your nouns
Vary your sentence openers by using fronted adverbials
Use a variety of conjunctions
Include similes, metaphors and personification
You can use this to start you off if you wish:
Nestled in the middle of an ancient forest, was a mysterious cottage, which was guarded by the trees.
Below the angry, dark clouds stood a castle, which stood proudly on an island.
Below is a sentence openers mat to help you: