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The Greville Primary School

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Starter: Complete the test. 


Today, you are going to write a description using yesterday's brainstorm. At the bottom are some of your brainstorms from yesterday. Have a look at the work and magpie the phrases you like. I have underlined my favourite ones. 



Learning Objective : To be able to write a Scene Description


Things we are looking for: 

Success Criteria: Use powerful adjectives to describe your nouns

                                    Vary your sentence openers by using fronted adverbials

                                    Use a variety of conjunctions

                                    Include similes, metaphors and personification


You can use this to start you off if you wish:


Nestled in the middle of an ancient forest, was a mysterious cottage, which was guarded by the trees. 


Below the angry, dark clouds stood a castle, which stood proudly on an island. 


Below is a sentence openers mat to help you:


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